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I think you did a good job on this piece. I don't feel like it totally looks like the characters though. This could just be because you didn't use the Disney style. Which is totally fine. Their faces are well done but seem a little to harsh for the characters. They don't look quite young enough. Rapunzel has very childlike features in the movie.
You did a great job on their noses. They look quite realistic. Maybe that's what I think is a little different about this piece. Their nose, mouth, ears, and clothes all look realistic. While their hair, eyes and the shape of their head seem cartoon like.
I really like how you made them look at each other with a loving glance. It adds sweet emotion to the piece. Your lines are also nice and crisp, which is wonderful. This is a beautiful clean drawing. Great for coloring later. You should be very proud of it. I hope that this critique helps some and is fair. When critiquing a piece I always try to give my total honest opinion. I hope you don't mind too much. Have a nice day! =D
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StarryKnightStudio Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student General Artist
thank you so much for taking time out of your day to leave me a critique! i really appreciate it! :)

you're right, my stylistic approach makes it look less like the characters than I'd hoped, and i'll definitely keep that in mind for next time ^^ But i'm certainly glad that you feel i've gotten the mood right, as that was exactly the kind of mood that i was going for!

Again, thank you for the critique and giving me your honest opinion! It'll definitely help me out next time~ :D
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covert15 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student Digital Artist
You're welcome! I try really hard to critique other peoples art work. I know I would want somebody else to do that for me. (Sadly I don't have a premium membership so I can't get critiqued.)

I really do think you got the mood right. I'm so glad you aren't mad at me for giving my honest opinion about your art. I'm always afraid I'm going to hurt somebodies feelings.
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StarryKnightStudio Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student General Artist
i think that's a great thing to do, I feel like i might want to go and critique someone's work now haha :D
well, even without the premium, asking for feedback will sometimes spur a good critique even though it's not a technical "critique" ^^

thank you so much! OMK, of course i wouldn't be! you gave a very professional critique and i would be a terrible artist if i didn't give a professional response ^^
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covert15 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yeah. I do ask for people to critique my work, but it doesn't catch enough attention. I don't get very many comments anyway. But I'll keep trying.

You're welcome again. Well thanks. You wouldn't be a bad artist if you didn't give a professional response. =D Well thanks for being so kind!!! I hope to see more of your work in the future!
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StarryKnightStudio Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Student General Artist
I'll try and give you a critique sometime this week~ :D

You're welcome! Well, i don't know. Skill level wise i would still be a good artist, but what good is an artist who doesn't know how to act professionally about their work and others? you're welcome, and thank you! ^^
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covert15 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
THANKS!!!

And I kind of see what you are saying. You're welcome!
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StarryKnightStudio Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Student General Artist
you're welcome~! :D

exactly ^^
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