Flamingo Umbrella

There are some very striking points about this piece that I enjoy. For one the composition is absolutely beautiful. The way the cups recede into the background give this piece the sense of depth and scale that an Alice piece really needs to show. The dress and hair are fairly well done as well. What I find to be offputting about this piece is the flamingo first and foremost. For being such a large focal point he doesn't quite have as much of a crisp feel that I think he should. Some parts tend to be ambiguous such as the beak. It's kind of hard to see that transition from the white to the brown as the brown isn't defined well enough to truly stand out. Ontop of that the bottom of the flamingo where his belly meets her shoulder is a bit strange. I'm pretty sure the flamingo is sitting ontop of her but there's no real indication of that it almost looks like he dissapears behind her but you can see the shadow of his belly on her shoulder so it's strange. Other then that there are some minor issues that I can point out like the proportions of the face seeming a bit off but not majorly. Good job overall!